Silken sunset (Must Read Award)
Silken Sunset A pastel skys fire fades so slowlyAs tranquil blue and green melt into grey and black.Spectral orange, red and pink cloudDiminish to sullen grey.The last embers of the dayFizzle behind...
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Congrats!This is most deserving!You've penned a very beautiful read
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Excellent, J.You really do this so well.You really got sunrises and sunsets down good.S.
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what a great way to feel a sunset... nice to read you !!!Visit me at To the end of the earth I search for your face, for the one who laid all of our beauty to waste, threw our hope into hell and our...
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Hi Leftfeild,A very nicely crafted poem. Sunsets are still beguiling experience even at my rarified age. Each one is fifferen.A delightful read.Paul
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Thank you for the kind comments and award. I didn't expect it for this piece. I was on the bus home and the sky was pink with the sun setting. I got to watch the whole thing fade down from orange to...
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A most beautiful piece LF and todaysMust Read...Congratulations...leftfeildCongratsOn yourMustReadAward!!!Twilight Myst A white flowergrows in quietnessLet your tonguebecome that flowerVisit Friendly...
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Left:Congrats on the well-deserved awards. You've shown a colorful and ever-changing panorama.I wonder: does the word "rot" really fit in? Maybe you might want to change that solitary word.Great...
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@Gaer, I see your point. I was going for words to do with wood, but it does seem a bit out of place... Thanks for pointing that out. I'll give it some thought.Thank you all for very kind coments. I'm...
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Hear hear!You painted this well! I shall be back for more!
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Left:Good choice of words. "Melt" seems to make the hues flow from one to another.Gaer
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Melt does seem to get green to pink so much better. It makes them run into one another. Thanks for the suggestion. I always admire artists aho can paint the sunrise and sunset as they see it. I wish I...
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well you earned it and many congrats on your MUST READ AWARD!!Visit me at To the end of the earth I search for your face, for the one who laid all of our beauty to waste, threw our hope into hell and...
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Ahhhh what a scene! Thank you for letting me see this. :)Poems For The Heart and Soul Please Drop by the Poetry Factory
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Well, I kinda wanted to paint your sunset, J.But my selections of colours and my brush turned around again in thought."The Tide Rushing in on Coffin's Point""...the drifting clouds...
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I like the idea of water over coffin point... water can't be stopped like that, it always flows, like life until all the water is gone. Coffins and death, connotate well and waterfalls are dangerous....
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"Our last stop is at Coffin Point Plantation, which at 2,000 square acres was one of the largest cotton plantations in the region, with 240 slaves. Thomas Coffin's plantation home, built in the late...
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